Rainy day

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Here is my critique.

Background - You can see the rain coming down in the window and also the clouds in the sky.  You portray the rain pretty well.  The clouds should be darker and they should be a solid blanket of clouds. These are rain clouds and not sunny day clouds.  The plants do not show veins and they look two dimensional.  They do show that they are being rained on quite well. Good job.

Couple
The couple look they are in love. They are gazing into each other's eyes.  The hair looks great, it is highlighted and shaded quite well. You can see strands in the hair and it is quite life-like in both characters.  Heads and necks are shaded quite well and they look good.  The clothes hang on them well and there are wrinkles in the clothes.  The girl's hands are in natural positions and the look like hands.  They are shaded quite well.

Conclusion
This is a really good picture.